tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2531324919089791378.post1617075400673069974..comments2024-03-11T11:16:50.056-07:00Comments on Writing with Hope: First Fight, First Kiss BlogfestHope Robersonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16877380868985454894noreply@blogger.comBlogger19125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2531324919089791378.post-40461642510579722512012-06-13T19:22:01.954-07:002012-06-13T19:22:01.954-07:00Hah! Glad I wasn't the only one expecting (and...Hah! Glad I wasn't the only one expecting (and wanting) that to happen.Aldrea Alienhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05652344290376563676noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2531324919089791378.post-22624396939981887262012-06-13T16:29:09.829-07:002012-06-13T16:29:09.829-07:00Wow! That was awesome! So much tension! Well do...Wow! That was awesome! So much tension! Well done!Lisa Reganhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12899014095250160853noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2531324919089791378.post-13537881805911872272012-06-13T09:27:24.324-07:002012-06-13T09:27:24.324-07:00AHHH! I love it! And yes, I think fight scenes are...AHHH! I love it! And yes, I think fight scenes are SO.MUCH.FUN! I might even like them better than kissing scenes. Don't ask me why that is. I think kissing scenes are harder for me. :PLeigh Covingtonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16377634002477171615noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2531324919089791378.post-58112175410593075332012-06-13T08:17:56.244-07:002012-06-13T08:17:56.244-07:00This was really intriguing, and there was great te...This was really intriguing, and there was great tension throughout the piece. I'm curious as to why she can't be a protector just because she's a girl.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2531324919089791378.post-63594516197907577542012-06-13T06:39:51.902-07:002012-06-13T06:39:51.902-07:00Definitely loving Grayson's internal struggle....Definitely loving Grayson's internal struggle. I'd love to know more about exactly what the "curse" entails, where it comes from, and the gender rules that are keeping her from realizing her true potential.Crystal Collierhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03912469552483168148noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2531324919089791378.post-80910647399559043952012-06-12T21:55:45.276-07:002012-06-12T21:55:45.276-07:00This scene was dripping with tension! And I agree ...This scene was dripping with tension! And I agree with Cassie, some of it sexual :) I'm curious to know how this is resolved...Kimhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03994768531978964801noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2531324919089791378.post-51379723457734628352012-06-12T19:20:26.630-07:002012-06-12T19:20:26.630-07:00I love Grayson's struggle with his situation. ...I love Grayson's struggle with his situation. Is it a curse as he mentions, or a gift? My guess is both.James Andersonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01080127767269357364noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2531324919089791378.post-74620963899030011032012-06-12T17:47:40.333-07:002012-06-12T17:47:40.333-07:00Wow, I really loved this. Your writing is very enj...Wow, I really loved this. Your writing is very enjoyable to read, and I loved Grayson :)<br /><br />AndreaAndrea Teaganhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02050710871603076745noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2531324919089791378.post-48571639593160825812012-06-12T13:42:15.659-07:002012-06-12T13:42:15.659-07:00Great characters! Nice dialogue. :)
Thanks for pa...Great characters! Nice dialogue. :)<br /><br />Thanks for participating in our blogfest!Jackiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04526192448146446752noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2531324919089791378.post-80861306389207171712012-06-12T12:31:23.614-07:002012-06-12T12:31:23.614-07:00Eri seems like a kick-butt lead character. A lot o...Eri seems like a kick-butt lead character. A lot of great tension between the two of them! :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03060064276650474244noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2531324919089791378.post-18163060429004990072012-06-12T10:14:53.806-07:002012-06-12T10:14:53.806-07:00For a second I thought you posted your kiss scene ...For a second I thought you posted your kiss scene then it turned. What a twist of events and so well written and gripping at the same time.<br /><br />I want to read more of this. So many questions!Danihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11026644605799767199noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2531324919089791378.post-27749819803126498712012-06-12T10:03:37.738-07:002012-06-12T10:03:37.738-07:00Everything I read about this wip sounds so good! I...Everything I read about this wip sounds so good! I'm totally with Cassi, kiss already! I love it:)Deanahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17958057331230037880noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2531324919089791378.post-42448589011722938232012-06-12T09:10:27.176-07:002012-06-12T09:10:27.176-07:00Ooh, he's gonna discover it's a gift right...Ooh, he's gonna discover it's a gift right, with her help? LOL. I wanted them to kiss each other and get it over with!Jaycee DeLorenzohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08796587039929398655noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2531324919089791378.post-7152666496326905092012-06-12T09:09:16.540-07:002012-06-12T09:09:16.540-07:00I liked it. Great job. And yes, fight scenes are...I liked it. Great job. And yes, fight scenes are wicked fun to write. :)Mina Burrowshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14483363743530076604noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2531324919089791378.post-70575001837209307072012-06-12T08:11:12.805-07:002012-06-12T08:11:12.805-07:00The whole time I read this I just wanted one of th...The whole time I read this I just wanted one of them to just grab and kiss. Haha!Cassie Maehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17706774393186819619noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2531324919089791378.post-5931669877692148862012-06-12T07:16:28.220-07:002012-06-12T07:16:28.220-07:00I love writing fight scenes. Nothing makes me hap...I love writing fight scenes. Nothing makes me happier than writing a nice bout of verbal sparring between a couple of characters.<br /><br />I thought your scene was very well done. Nice job!M.J. Fifieldhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15626475963328519693noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2531324919089791378.post-24188365909348345252012-06-12T05:24:09.747-07:002012-06-12T05:24:09.747-07:00She definitely seems like a strong character. I li...She definitely seems like a strong character. I like that she see's it as a gift; it says a lot about her.Suzihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16502606950280751205noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2531324919089791378.post-81427682070391161142012-06-12T02:52:41.647-07:002012-06-12T02:52:41.647-07:00Every time I read an excerpt from this story, I lo...Every time I read an excerpt from this story, I love Eri more and more. She is a fantastic character, and I love that she wasn't afraid to offer a differing opinion, even though it would lead to a fight. Great work, as always! :DKyra Lennonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13853462182450429660noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2531324919089791378.post-77359816479020337762012-06-12T02:30:10.678-07:002012-06-12T02:30:10.678-07:00I love Eri's conviction that it's a gift a...I love Eri's conviction that it's a gift and not a curse. Her defiance of Grayson was really powerful. You could feel the tension rising throughout the scene, and between every line of dialogue they exchanged thing got that little bit more strained between them.Clarehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06102199553293874800noreply@blogger.com