Danielle at Entertaining Interests and Jackie at Bouquet of Books are having this action packed blogfest where they invite us to share our first fight and first kiss scenes in our WiPs.
Tuesday's was sharing 1st FIGHT, you can read mine here if you like.
Today, June 14 - We share our 1st KISS scene. It can be a peck on the cheek or a full fledge kissing session.
Today, June 14 - We share our 1st KISS scene. It can be a peck on the cheek or a full fledge kissing session.
This is from MY PROTECTOR: THE CALLING (surprise, surprise). Eri had to re stitch Grayson's wound after fighting a beast.
Finnley strolled
back in with Grayson’s cleaned-up shirt as I finished the second set of sutures.
“If you keep ripping those open, Nurse Eri here won’t be able to keep you so
pretty,” Finnley teased him. “And, what was it Doctor Simone said to you? Oh
yeah, ‘Your future wife will be able to see those scars if you’re not careful.’
”
“As far as I’m
concerned, she already has,” Grayson joked back.
“Oh,” I mumbled, my
cheeks flaming. “Well that should do it then,” and I walked out the door as
fast as I could and kept walking.
How could I have
been so stupid! Of course I wasn’t the only one who had seen Grayson’s injuries.
After all, the other Protectors weren’t the least bit surprised he had a woman
in his room the previous night. Obviously it happened before. Stupid, stupid, stupid.
I was so far
inside my head, determined to put as much distance between me and the source of
my infinite anguish, I hadn’t heard Grayson running up behind me.
“Eri!”
Oh crap, keep walking, act like I don’t
care.
“Eri, wait.” He
jogged in front of me, forcing me to a stop. “What’s gotten into you? Why’d you
leave like that?”
“Um, I need to get
this stuff back to the hospital,” I lied not looking directly at him, afraid my
heart would break.
“Did I offend you
by saying that?” His eyebrows scrunched in misunderstanding.
“By saying what?” I
tried acting as if I hadn’t noticed his words back in my cabin.
“By saying my future
wife has already seen my scars. That didn’t affect you at all?”
Feigning
nonchalance could only last so long. I raised my head to look into his eyes,
tears glossing mine. “Did you run after me to rub it in? I think you know how I
feel about you. So you’re trying to hurt me, is that it?”
“God, Eri, you can
be so blind sometimes!” He grabbed his hair as if pulling it out. “It’s you. You’re
the one I want to see my scars. No one else.” He placed his hands on my arms
and bent down to get directly in front of my face. “Only you, Eri.”
I stammered, unable
to speak. My mouth tried to move, attempting to spit something out in response,
but my brain wouldn’t cooperate.
His lips saved me,
pressing against mine before I realized his intention. Tender, light. A million
times softer than I imagined a billion times before.
Breaking our
connection, he held me at arm’s length, locking his magnetic eyes on mine. If I
had to bet on it, I could’ve sworn tears painted them a shade darker. Grayson’s
mouth crooked up at the corners before falling back into a straight line.
My eyebrows
hitched into my hair, my mouth hung open, words hated me. A strange sound
crawled its way out of my throat, but refused to turn coherent.
“I love you, Eri. How
can you not know that?” He leaned down again, his lips grazing mine.
A murmur escaped from
somewhere in the tangle of my emotions. My mind shut off and my body responded
letting my lips take over, moving with his, opening in surrender. I squeezed
into him, his arms locking my body against his, months of restraint released,
flooded with the heat blooming between us.
A whistle pierced
our kiss.
“It’s about time
you two idiots figured it out!” Finnley yelled, laughing from the porch swing
beside Jen.
Thoughts?
Do you like writing kissing scenes?
Do you like writing kissing scenes?
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The whole scene is great but I particularly love this:
ReplyDelete"His lips saved me, pressing against mine before I realized his intention. Tender, light. A million times softer than I imagined a billion times before."
Nice.
oh.. I love this so much.. and yeah, the name Grayson is fantastic :)
ReplyDeleteOhh, what girl doesn't dream of having that moment?? Also, I agree with M.J - that line is awesome!
ReplyDeleteI love that. To go from such extreme disappointment to the I love you. Finnley broke their moment up just a bit too soon though. :)
ReplyDeleteOh Jeezus! Gawd that was good.
ReplyDeleteLoved it!! Leaves me wanting more.
ReplyDeleteOh wow, great kissing scene, and great kiss! I love the misunderstanding, too :)
ReplyDeleteThat was very sweet. I loved it! I love the misunderstanding. I knew what he was saying and I was like, "No! Turn around! He meant you!" Great stuff!
ReplyDeleteI heart Grayson. *sigh*
ReplyDeleteGreat excerpt!
Thanks for participating in our blogfest!
Grayson. Le Sigh. I need more of him. Cough* Cough*
ReplyDeleteThis moment was SO long in coming. And i don't mean that in a bad way. You're so good and holding out the romantic tension. SO GOOD.
LOVE Eri and Grayson!!
Wow, I'm in love with this story! I want more please:)
ReplyDeleteLOL. "words hated me..." Awesomesauce! So sweet.
ReplyDeleteVery entertaining scene and I loved the last line! :)
ReplyDeleteAw, that was great!!!
ReplyDeleteHope, that was awesome. Loved it! I've never written a kissing scene, except for the one in the blog hop, and that wasn't made up. This was great!
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